My hair is longer
My waist is smaller
I’ve become a vegetarian
(You’d probably laugh real hard at that one)
I don’t talk as much
I feel harder
(angrier)
*
Miles away
I still look for you
as stupid as that may be
(but I guess crazier things have happened)
Can’t help but hate you a little
Because I love you a lot
(still)
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I really like this. Great form and I can feel the emotion!
Watching you read it in person was so much better than simply reading this comment :)
I agree it was a special moment
Still can’t comment or Luke without opening this is a browser. What’s the deal with WordPress? I love this, by the way.
If the fault is mine, I have no idea why or how to fix it. But I’m glad you love the post :)
Check your settings. Maybe updating it changed things. I’m seeing you have only 2 posts and 11 followers. That’s not right, either.
I know. It’s driving me crazy.
Really great structure underpinning strong emotional content. Great stuff.
Thanks Nick!
Reblogged this on Among other things, J.
Really beautiful piece. It’s a heartbreaking examination of a love that never leaves and the utter hatred it can cause when lost.
Absolutely beautifully written the aching torment is so very clear!
♥
I really love this one. I’ve been revisiting posts a lot since I haven’t had much time for new. But I wrote something today so I’ll be posting fresh next :)
Well I like your revisits mostly because they’re all new to me. Even when I do know the piece I’m reminded of the awesomeness of it.
I look forward to new pieces, to be fair I look forward to anything you write 😄
Aww, I feel loved <3
As you should 💙💚💜❤💖💛🍍😄
Aww, a pineapple!!!!!!
Well you said you wanted one 🍍💛