I had a thought and I opened my mouth to speak about it. And I guess I must have taken in too much air (you know how that goes) because next thing I know, I’m choking violently on my own spit, trying desparately to gain control of my airway so I can finish saying what I never even started. It’s kind of pathetic how badly my throat was burning by that point and the tears were uncalled for and embarassing so I stood up and stumbled to the bathroom, hacking into my shirtsleeve. I closed the door and leaned over the pristine petite porcelian sink (the host, dear friend of mine, was into the whole Parisian chique look). I tried deep breathing and for a moment it did seem to calm me down but all the coughing must have set off a full body reaction because before I could really prepare, my stomach was heaving. A deep, full belly squeeze possessed me and I lunged for the toilet, in all its pink fluffy glory. I don’t recall how long I heaved, more than a couple times but not so many that I had time to really think, then I was finally dispelling whatever had a hold on me. I went along with it, trying to relax as much as one can in such a situation and just waited for my body to calm. I felt spent but slightly more normal so I set about washing my face and hands, taking in huge lungfuls of air. Finally satisfied with my composure, I turned to take a curious peak (you can’t deny that knowing what comes out of the body is somehow vital information) into the toilet before flushing. I looked down and while I was surprised, I can’t say I was stunned, to see floating in the murky putrid liquid, your name.
15 thoughts on “Sour”
Omg yes yes yes yes! I LOVE THIS! SO MUCH!
I DO TOO!!!
Highly poetic puke. Excellent. I always enjoy seeing the written word pop up in unexpected places and you’ve taken it to a whole new level….
Coming from you, this makes me most happy :)
Great pleasure – it’s really fresh and raw and caught me by surprise.
Glad I can still do that ;)
Gee, Thanks. ; )
I got better ;)
That is a relief ! ; )
Reblogged this on Among other things, J and commented:
Yesterday’s post put me in the mood to revisit this oldie. Enjoy :)
Oh bravo my dear. I was trying to guess with this my my mind isn’t quite as clever. This was an amazing journey and such violent imagery in the choking and hacking, I felt it all. Fantastic!!
I’m so glad you were fooled in all the right ways :) I thoroughly enjoyed writing it.
It shows! I love a good misdirect. Yours are so poignant and wonderfully surprising.