I want a fit for every facet
Give my heart for you to clasp it
Always locked, forever fastened
But no.
We’re more like a puzzle piece
Different partner for every crease
You fit one but leave behind threes
Alone.
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Among other things, J 
I really like this. I think my favorite part is the “but no.” it gives a finality to it that is purposeful and direct. Good work!
sometimes that finality feels like a kick in the face.
I totally agree with the queen of the pandas above – feels like a departure or breakthrough; feels really intriguing. It’s revolving around my head now….which is my favourite type of writing.
ooo, orbiting your brain sounds like a fun past time. I’m getting dizzy though
It’s not a destination or an activity I’d recommend J!
Made me queasy
Well (shrugs)…. I did tell you….
a very apt allagory. Achingly pulls you in. So loving and unresolved. Absolutely beautiful piece
Unresolved..but maybe that can change